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Will she love me tomorrow
or will we fall apart?
Will I still forever be
inside your heart?

'Cause promises are easily made
and easier to break
In time will I just become
everything you hate?

It has happened before
It could happen again
Will it become so bad
that we couldn't be friends?

'Cause promises are easy to make
but now ours is broken
Too many words
were left unspoken

And as I cry
myself to sleep
I'm killed by the thought
of you not loving me

'Cause making promises
are making mistakes
Like not killing myself
for your sake

And as I cry
All through the night
I'm gonna die
To make things right
©2008-2009 ~evolkrow1379
:iconevolkrow1379:

Author's Comments

Yup, written on the 4th of December, 2008. :D The idea of this poem was in my head for a while. Like, the lines "will she love me tomorrow or will we fall apart?" and "'Cause making memories are making mistakes" I was actually going to stop it after the 3rd last stanza...but I really wanted to use the line making promises are making mistakes...so yeah. But, the idea of this poem came to mind when I was thinking of Brittney/Abby. Like, when me and Brittney were going out, we made lots of promises...but none of them were kept...well, some were...but the majority of them were broken. Like, she always said she'd love me....but, she doesn't. =\ Then Abby said that she'd always love me too...so...I'm just a bit...well, I can't think of the right word to use...but....basically, I'm not sure if what she is saying is true... But yeah, anyways, I hope you like it.

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:iconnightsrain06:
I <3 this poem. It's sad but nicely written.^^

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"And since you know you cannot see yourself,
so well as by reflection, I, your glass,
will modestly discover to yourself,
that of yourself which you yet know not of. "
~Shakespeare
:iconevolkrow1379:
Aww, thank you! :hug: :aww:

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Aw. :C-hugtackle-

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that's sweet~

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awww :hug: thats sad.
But, I like it

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:iconevolkrow1379:
Thank you! :hug: I'm glad ^^

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(O O)
< ^ >
- l,,,l
- l''''l

I am a mere moth in a field of butterflies.
:iconevolkrow1379:
thanks :aww: :hug:

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(O O)
< ^ >
- l,,,l
- l''''l

I am a mere moth in a field of butterflies.
:iconevolkrow1379:
-megarunjumphugattack-

--
(O O)
< ^ >
- l,,,l
- l''''l

I am a mere moth in a field of butterflies.
:icondanipantzz:
-dies-

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asdfjkl; <3

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