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Such lovely roses one by one burst out of the melting snow. There's a new day filled with the radiant sun. Tears glide down your face, staring at the dead body beside you as you awake from your bed. The body decays, and memories disapear one by one. Only leaving the memoirs of our first kiss  under the the great tree, pink and white petals fall and dance in the breaze. The death of your beloved shows the harsh reality and you realize love, whether you have it or not, will end in pain. But hey, don't cry, wipe away the tears...the sorrow filled tears...smile, for you'll forget the pain tomorrow. Move on and don't despair, revive the colors from the hues of gray. The dying light flickers and shines a path for you through the darkness. The hands of despair cannot reach you from the darkness as you follow your path. Such irony on this beautiful day...the beauty of a tragic death.
©2008-2009 ~evolkrow1379
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Well, this is about someone you love dearly dying, and you despairing over their death. But realize it would be better not to dwell on their death and the person who died probably wouldn't want you to live the rest of your life in agony. So, in time, they forget the pain that came with the person's death and yeah. You should get the point by now...but yes, hope you enjoy it.

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:iconrecklesschaos:
Very very well written, kind of like...someone is speaking in a cheerful ton, but the poem is depressing..:D

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I will...Burn My Dread, I once ran away from the the God of Fear, and he chained me to despair.

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:iconxxxpain-of-bloodxxx:
awww its really nice poem .. ,ooh will im not good at naming stuff -____- i suck
:icontearofdarkness:
:aww: sooo cuuuuuteeeeeeeee~ :+fav:

umm...name? perhaps somethin from diru?
beautiful dirt?...wait beautiful death suits more ^^;

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:iconboomerlover11:
hmm..what about Roses From the Grave? i don't know...i know it might not fit well...i'm not good with names...what about Beauty in Death? sorry those kinda suck :\

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Does my other half have what I don't? Did he get the looks? The luck? The love...
:iconboomerlover11:
oh and by the way it's really good too :]

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Does my other half have what I don't? Did he get the looks? The luck? The love...
:iconevolkrow1379:
lol, I was aiming for something towards that. :D so yea, thanks! :D

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:iconevolkrow1379:
lol, it's ok....and thanks! :D

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I am a mere moth in a field of butterflies.
:iconevolkrow1379:
hehehe, thanks! ...but it's weird that you made the :+fav: thing but didn't fave it...^^;

but uh...ok...it was actually inspired by their song Ain't Afraid to Die.....so yeah...but yeah, that fits....

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whaaaaaaaaa!!!!! i forgot ^^;
oh ME!!! STUPID ME! :shakefish:

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